Leisure activities is a must in a child routine. It is the fual for the other serious activities. Rather, it is assuntiol to balance out kids life style. Evolving educational aspect might bring bordom and dull for the child. For that matter i would disagree.
Non educational activities is usually go hand on hand with playing and fun times. It is the time when phiyscal act would play the role for the most part. This is important for them to recharge their mind with energy therefor perforum well in learning.
Also, a child routine can not toulerate that much of seriousness all day long. They will eventually start to get bored and mad. Further, they will had a deficiency in the learning process. Children will tend to be fussy and trouble makers thanks for that educational dedicated imbalanced lifestyle. Like most of super nany show, for mor than 16 episods, she dealed with out of control kids. Parents were primarily focusing on learning activities, no time for fun.
Eventhough some kids would managto serviv that educational camp, but would for sure suffer mentally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...and dull for the child. For that matter i would disagree. Non educational acti...
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Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
... Non educational activities is usually go hand on hand with playing and fun times...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...o get bored and mad. Further, they will had a deficiency in the learning process. C...
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Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...ow, for mor than 16 episods, she dealed with out of control kids. Parents were primarily...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94535519126 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56857340778 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.688524590164 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 506.74238477 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.4770161387 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.3333333333 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.2 20.7667163134 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.53333333333 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156853139502 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520142531115 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373165206353 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914599746372 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0177302953469 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.54 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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