Some people think that we should keep away from others to improve our relationship, because being away from people reminds us of how important they are. Others think we should always stay with others to have good relationship because we can communicate with them more often. What do you think?
On the road of life, friends are necessary. Friends can do something they really like together, can accompany them when they are depressed, and can have the same experience. In my opinion, I like to stay with friends, because it can release pressure and do something.
In the first place, being with friends can relieve stress. It's a good way to talk with friends because they can understand and encourage each other. Take myself as an example. On weekends, I like to eat and go shopping with my good friends. At this time, I am happy because the pressure of a week is gone and I feel relaxed. Last week, I had a bad test result, so I was in a bad mood. My good friend took me to the library and analyze the wrong questions, so I was in a good emotion.
In addition, a friend is a good partner in whole life. In most cases, friends can accompany you to do something you like. Take myself as an example. I have a friend who likes swimming very much. Every month we go swimming together servals times. I remember that the first time I met her was in the swimming pool, and she taught me how to swim. Because of swimming, we meet and became good friends. Compared with other friends, only this friend has the same hobby and can do it together. Those who can do the same things with us should be treasured.
Admittedly, some friends may not be sincere to you. They may tell some lies. And when people know that, they may feel unhappy. But to put it another way, maybe these lies are white, just in order to promote friendship.
In a word, I prefer to stay with my friends, because I can do what we like and release the pressure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: It's; It is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, really, so, i feel, in addition, in most cases, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33876221498 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36691968132 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517915309446 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 618.680645161 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.1344086022 60% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.598741616 48.9658058833 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 55.5 100.406767564 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7916666667 20.6045352989 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236810832743 0.236089414692 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679299619165 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620563954988 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140250861378 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038826109403 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 11.7677419355 46% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 58.1214874552 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.1575268817 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.0 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.19 8.01818996416 77% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 86.8835125448 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.0537634409 68% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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