Everyone should stay in school until the age of eighteen. To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
The scholar formation in the life of an individual is an important period for him and society. The school contributes to basic general knowledge by developing foundational skills while acknowledging that socialization needs practice. On the other hand, maturity also requires time to be achieved. That's why many countries consider 18's as an age of responsibility and some even believe young adulthood starts after 20 years. I believe every person should have the time to grow and become the best version of himself.
Although education begins at birth and the family constitutes its central structure, the Academy is where it is formalized. All the core information essential to developing their abilities is provided there. Besides of simple knowledge, it becomes a space of socialization to essay how the future will be in advance. The school is, therefore a cornerstone piece to form the personality of the individual beyond their contribution to basic informations and skills.
The time a person spends in school is also important. Before the eighteen birthday, most of the people have not completely develop responsibility like to face regular working activities. In fact, most of the countries do not consider maturity until after the 20 years and it is another argument to support staying in school at least until the 18's.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, therefore, while, at least, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27102803738 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03480839826 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635514018692 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1334024896 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123320800197 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366475434745 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487550671905 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824044155761 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659363657232 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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