Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment—doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Personal enjoyment is often confused with living a careless and carefree life. Personally, I believe a person should focus more on
their life ambitions. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in this essay.
To begin with, a personal enjoyment should not come in between of one's future aims. Working on individuals future goals are
going to build the path for rest of their life, if one spent too much of their important time living in the moment without thinking
about the following years, they may face a very bad situation in life. My personal experience is a compelling example of
this, when I was in high school, I used to spend all my time with my friends hanging out while totally neglecting my
academics. Consequently, In my final year of school I faced a great problem, I worked on my future goal of becoming an Engineer
and pursue Engineering after high school I ended up passing school with a very low score and I was not able to get into any
Engineering College. This resulted in me going into a great depression which took 6 months to overcome by me and in the end, I
decided to repeat my final year of high school once again going back 2 years in life. For this reason, working for your
ambitions will shape a smooth path for the rest of life.
Secondly, many times one may end up in a really bad situation due to enjoying too much. A person living their life just for the
sake of fun may get into really bad habits. For instance,5 years back, one of my cousins who was in college at that time used got
into some unhealthy habits. He and his friends used to do all kinds of drugs. One afternoon under the influence of drugs they
got into a very bad accident on a road. The accident was severe that the doctors had to cut his legs and he has to live the rest of his
life handicapped. If it had not been the alcohol that day, he would have been living with all his limbs.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that focusing on important things in life is more important than spending all the time on
personal enjoyment. This is because of the fact that working at present ensure a happy future and one may not get into any kind
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: IN_THE_MOMENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'at the moment' (=currently)?
Suggestion: at the moment
...too much of their important time living in the moment without thinking about the following y...
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Line 18, column 29, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...he time on personal enjoyment. This is because of the fact that working at present ensure a happy futur...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1789.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.39557739558 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37545254274 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493857493857 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.485058815 48.9658058833 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3888888889 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6111111111 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.53405017921 397% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139942953904 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490250994019 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442152666585 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.045161471759 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426036419018 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.