Some people say that History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, whether history or natural science subjects plays a more pivotal role in academic as well as social environment has been a source of controversy. While others hold the belief that Science-based or technology-based subjects are far weightier than the benefits of history, I am convinced that history remains its special position as one of the most significant school subjects.
On the one hand, it is hard to deny that Science and Technology have certain advantages over history, making many advocates suppose that these subjects should be paid more attention to. Firstly, thanks to the advance of Science and Technology, the world has witnessed the considerable improvements in a variety of fields such as healthcare, finance and education. As an illustration, with the aid of scientific and technological findings, the appearance of the financial realm has changed substantially. Bitcoin, a kind of crypto currency coined with the complex computer system, has been proven to help investors earn a huge sum of money. Also, having a grasp of subjects related to science and technology has been considered to be more likely to get offered a well-paid job in the future. Take IT engineers or software developers as prime examples. In the job market today, multiple enterprises are willing to offer them with a high rate of pay.
On the other hand, I am firmly of the opinion that history poses more important impacts on students. Apparently, having a mastery of history may provide learners with a deeper insight and a broader view of the way the world and its everything work. From historical view, many aspects of all fields such as currency, meditation or Media can be interpreted thoroughly and fully. For instance, it can be easier for an amateur comprehend money’s functions through its long-lasting journey in the past. More importantly, studying history encourages school boys and school girls nourish their love for their own country. This can be seen in patriotic stories or predecessors’ legends integrated into lessons in the textbooks or mass media. Learning history, therefore, is regarded as one of the most effective ways to educate children at early ages.
As indicated above, although Science and Technology possess irrefutable advantages, I am inclined to believe that history is one of the subjects that should be prioritized
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24409448819 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99971639343 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590551181102 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8114063069 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.529411765 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4117647059 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76470588235 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300634634648 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799262649962 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724555579383 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176609076665 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381280047715 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.