At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of old people.
Do the advantages of the situation outweigh the disadvantages ?
A contemporary review of the population of some nations shows that youths outnumber older people. Though this mismatch may have its drawbacks, it appears the circumstance offers more benefits such as, but not limited to economic buoyancy and population preservation.
Without a doubt, having a youthful population gives the economy a healthy status. In other words, the economy blossoms when the workforce consists of young individuals. For example, Brazil, a country with many youths recorded higher economic growth than older Scandinavian populations in the last two decades. Also, countries with brilliant colours of youthfulness on their population tend to have lower death rates especially in the periods of pandemics. This is exemplified by the mortality data from the recent Covid-19 pandemic where countries with older people were the worst hit. Lastly, a significant portion of national revenue often goes to the care of the aged in countries with a high number of such population due to the peculiarities of ageing. Japan and Italy easily come to mind in this regard.
Admittedly, a young population has some demerits, though these are often less important. Crimes such as cyber thefts and rape may be slightly increased. Though an unpublished report said cyberfraud was higher in Russia, a country with many young individuals, than Nigeria with a preponderance of old men and women, a post-hoc study of the report showed that the difference was not statistically significant. Besides, the growth curve may outpace available resources resulting in an impoverished population but this is not always true of every young population.
In conclusion, though the recent youthful outlook of several countries' population may make them prone to crime and poverty, these cannot be compared to the benefits of having a young population which includes buoyant economy, low death rates and a healthy government purse.
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- At the present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of old people Do the advantages of the situation outweigh the disadvantages 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 62, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
... the recent youthful outlook of several countries population may make them prone to crime...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, lastly, look, may, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94289351187 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596666666667 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.9449699638 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.142857143 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207863635475 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661444538626 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415469862236 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11830516228 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388149890872 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.