some say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in world, subjects like science and technology are more important than History. Discuss both views and give your opinion
There is no unanimous opinion about which course is of greater significance in the present age despite having myriads of them. While some schools of thought believe no subject compares to history, others will not substitute science and technology for any other subject. The two sides will be considered in this essay and I will conclude.
Undoubtedly, History as a subject help students unearths relevant life concepts while also connecting them to their cultures and heritages. Moreover, lessons from past events are learnt from history and these usually come in handy when planning for the future. In the Yoruba culture, for example, marriages are made more original by incorporating tenets of their traditions. Furthermore, the role of Nelson Mandela during the apartheid period in South Africa will always be relevant in the annals of history. Therefore, the relevance of history in modern times by connecting the past to the future cannot be over-emphasized.
However, it is difficult to look beyond science and technology in the present fast-paced world. The world appears to be thriving based on innovations in the fields of science and technology. Where history relied on past events to stay in touch with reality, science and technology are deeply-rooted on facts backed by evidence. Besides, technology has made life more comfortable through developments like mobile phones, electronic gadgets and so on. The universe might have succumbed to the Covid-19 pandemic but for the unprecedented positive impact of science and technology. It, therefore, seems undebatable that science and technology are indispensable in the modern-day world.
To conclude, though history may be relevant as it helps connect the past to the future, its importance is dwarfed by that of science and technology because the latter has not only helped to keep man in existence through evidence-based strategies, it has also made life more worth living. 305 words
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3680781759 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93566854306 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592833876221 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6399673168 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.866666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237948458408 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664325739775 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591794665858 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133217082877 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297446927082 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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