Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
A scandal rips a society of its sanity. It squelches the mental peace of the citizens of any society which the scandal impacts. It weakens the trust a society places in its government, hence putting all the governmental activities under a lens of suspicion, which is detrimental to the functioning of any society. Saying that a scandal is “useful” just because it focuses our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could is simply going too far. The misery a scandal causes outweighs the number loopholes it exposes. Surely, a scandal does throw light upon the open gaps in a society’s governance, but saying that it is useful just because it brings to focus unprecedented problems in the society is not justified. This is because a scandal brings along with it communal anger, hopelessness and distrust in the government, which might get ossified over time. This is not healthy for any society, any day.
Often times a scandal is also blown out of proportion. This is because such news travels at a lightning speed through a chain of humans and media which might lead to distortion of the actual facts. This distortion does nothing apart from serving as a source of entertainment to the masses. This distortion serves no useful purpose, apart from playing with the minds of the public and making a mountain out of a molehill.
Consider the scandal caused by Vijay Mallya, an Indian business tycoon, who looted money from the Indian soil and escaped the nation overnight. This scandal caught the scornful public eye. A feeling of anger and resentment engulfed the tax paying general public whose hard earned money was looted. This scandal sprouted a distrust in its own government in the minds of a million Indians. This distrust has only ossified overtime, courtesy the numerous scandals that followed.
There are healthier and more efficient ways of brainstorming about possible problems that might be impending, than waiting for a scandal to burst. Thorough research about the existing ways of governmental functioning and the current management of things is one such way. It is incumbent upon our leaders, for example analysts and researchers, to investigate and analyse what loopholes the current society might have. These loopholes might one day be exploited by scammers to loot money or cause identity theft. It behooves the leaders of a society that these loopholes are amended and the open gaps in the day to day functioning of the society are filled to preclude any such mishappening.
Scandals do bring forth the prevailing loopholes of a society, but leave an indelible blemish that forever questions if the precious resources of a society are actually being put to good use, even when they are. In order to focus our attention on unprecedented problems waiting to be solved, we must focus on research and analysis and not rely on a scandal to make headlines someday.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 446, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
... that no speaker or reformer ever could is simply going too far. The misery a scan...
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Line 2, column 184, Rule ID: ACTUAL_EXPERIENCE[1]
Message: Use simply 'facts'.
Suggestion: facts
...a which might lead to distortion of the actual facts. This distortion does nothing apart fro...
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Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... source of entertainment to the masses. This distortion serves no useful purpose, ap...
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Line 3, column 247, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... and resentment engulfed the tax paying general public whose hard earned money was looted. Thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, so, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.5258426966 108% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 58.6224719101 104% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2430.0 2235.4752809 109% => OK
No of words: 486.0 442.535393258 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76210178169 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 215.323595506 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508230452675 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 746.1 704.065955056 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5209691837 60.3974514979 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45833333333 5.21951772744 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309872146383 0.243740707755 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812115529868 0.0831039109588 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133998179748 0.0758088955206 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1506910647 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103114542898 0.0667264976115 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.