The reading and the lecture are both about electronic recordes. The author feel that there are sevral advantages to adopting elctronuc medcal record system. The lectuer challenges the claims made by the author. She is of the opinion that these advantages are not realstic.
To begin with. The author argues that the use of electronic medical records will reduce costs. The article mentions that the electronic records will require large amount of storage space. This specific cliam is challenged by the lecturer. She states that doctors will use paper and then enter the papers to the system.
Secondly, The author points out that using electronic records will help preventing erros. The writer states that the standardization of forms and legible coumputer fonts will minimize human errors. The lecturer, however, rebts this claim by saying that electronic recordees will not help prefenting errors. Moreover, she states that the staff will enter the records to the cpmputer off the doctors writing, which will not solve anything.
finally, the author posits the elctronic records will aid research. The author suggest that medical recordes will make it easier eaiser for researcher to gather large amount of data. In contarst, The lecturer states the medcical records will not be make easier to gather data. She points out that there are strict privacy rules that would not allow that to happen.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The opinions of celebrities such as famous entertainers and athletes are more important to younger people than they are to older people Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 61
- In the United States medical information about patients traditionally has been recorded and stored on paper forms However there are efforts to persuade doctors to adopt electronic medical record systems in which information about patients is stored in ele 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 76, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'feels'.
Suggestion: feels
...h about electronic recordes. The author feel that there are sevral advantages to ado...
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Line 1, column 158, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...dopting elctronuc medcal record system. The lectuer challenges the claims made by t...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to prevent' or 'prevent'.
Suggestion: to prevent; prevent
...that using electronic records will help preventing erros. The writer states that the stand...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...ting, which will not solve anything. finally, the author posits the elctronic record...
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Line 7, column 80, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'suggests'.
Suggestion: suggests
...c records will aid research. The author suggest that medical recordes will make it easi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 225.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25333333333 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35513623102 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 145.348785872 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524444444444 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 419.366225166 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1628435405 49.2860985944 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5294117647 110.228320801 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2352941176 21.698381199 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 7.06452816374 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192413598051 0.272083759551 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657741093553 0.0996497079465 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523923731428 0.0662205650399 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126996997466 0.162205337803 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300662168373 0.0443174109184 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.3589403974 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 53.8541721854 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.28 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.42419426049 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.7273730684 42% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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