The effect of celebrities opinions on younger people. Personaly,I believe that famous entertainers and athletes opinions are much more important to younger people than older people. I feel this way for two reasons ,which i will explore in the following essay.
Fisrt, celebrities tend to be of young ages ,which make yonger people able to relate to them more than older people. My personal experince is a compelling example of this.
About five years ago, I was in love with famous young soccer player in my age. The reason I likes him very much is that we had the same age, which made me feel that I can do whatever he does. This love i had for him made me love soccer even more and train more just to be as good in this game as him. This young player about had famous opinions about popular issues a in our city, and I remmber that I have changed my opinion of this issues because of how much i admire him.
Secondly, I Think that older generations does not really trust celebrites as much as yonger people. The genral opinion of celebrites in the older people communites is that they are not honest. For instance, my father whom I would identfiy as old person does not believe anything that comes from celebrities mouths, whenever we see or hear a famous preson talking about any product my father would instantly feel that it is sacm or that the famous person is paid to talk abou it , which nowadays i believe he not wrong.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that young people are nore effected by famous etretaiers abd atheletes opinions than older poeople. This is because the ages of celebrites tend to be young, and duo to the fact that older people does not actually trust celebrities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, really, second, secondly, so, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 307.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55374592834 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38568989517 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491856677524 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.9646685766 48.9658058833 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8571428571 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259394164388 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110164322335 0.076458572812 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0953564186407 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173964703786 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905592769942 0.0645574589148 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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