Some people think that music plays an important role in society. Others think it is simply a form of entertainment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Experts and amateurs throughout the world have argued about importance and influence which music plays in modern society. While some say that this direction of art is just popular entertainment without any deep sense, others opine that it is the ancient layer of artist impressions, which is closely related with social realities. From my perspective, we may hardly find anyone who have not been interested in music in their life, so I am not an exception and I am sure in enormous role of this art in our life. The following paragraphs aim to put forward arguments from both sides, using examples to demonstrate points and support ideas.
There is an ample evidence that myriads of artists perform themselves only to earn money and enjoy the glory. More specifically, musical critics even do not pay attention to the most of modern industry members and the reason is absence of developing, discoveries in the genre or exclusive talent of a musician. At the same time, famous artists and bands make unbelievable concerts and shows, which inspire thousand fans on creating something new. Undoubtedly, popular music has focused on entertainment and has been the main aim to paint people’s routine in bright colors for centuries. I reckon that thousand years ago folk melodies and songs playing at fairs were well known and not thought provoking. Nowadays this genre has become elite and listeners may find a lot in this music.
There are other edges of music which everyone may find in modern or old compositions. The first face is deep sense which creator put into a song. It may be lyrics referring to important points in the history or to warming feelings. In addition, even melodies without words are able to paint beautiful pictures and huge worlds in imagination. Secondly, playing an instrument or singing is a kind of rare art, especially if we mention excellent artists who have spent the life to master their experience. In the end, I strongly advocate that an amateur in music is the most important advantage which this art may give. I have been learning to play guitar for more than fifteen years and feeling, when you have possibility to express emotions in melody or song made by your hands and voice, is the best therapy.
Although, many people assume that music is just a form of entertainment, I believe that music gifts the universe which helps us to learn something new and motivate us in difficult modern world. On top of that, all the above arguments show that the both sides have rights to live and people will have good topic for arguing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...vable concerts and shows, which inspire thousand fans on creating something new. Undoubt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, i reckon, in addition, kind of, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2127.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 438.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85616438356 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62762377548 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9308533778 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.947368421 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0526315789 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185390888772 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508650783173 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352700869736 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111424582333 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182413931522 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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