Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is a widely held belief that government should be responsible for preserving the environment, but there is a strong counter argument amongst sections of the people that it is responsibility of individual. However, I am of the opinion that this is a matter to be debated in light of several factors before a reasonable conclusion can be drawn.
The first and foremost reason is that authorities have a sufficient resource to tackle situation related nature. To justify, the state has enough money as well as manpower to take responsibility of the environment, so it is easy for them to preserve nature at its best.
The second worth mentioning reason here is that the government easily form a rule for industries. In other word, local authorities can impose a strict rule to companies such as textile, dye, chemical and so on to limit the amount of pollutant that to be released in the environment. For example, a recent survey conducted by an eminent environmentalist Eric Chane at Germany revealed that there is 60 % reduction in air pollution after authority enforces the law for the limitation of release hazardous waste into environment at Berlin city.
On the contrary, there are certain group of people who vehemently contend that preserving environment is responsibility of people because the government cannot control the actions of all individuals. Even with laws to protect environment, people must cooperate and follow the rule.
After analysing both the views, I am of the opinion that it is the government’s task to look after environment because they are capable of imposing strict rule to save nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 36, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, second, so, well, for example, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0936329588 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10129177808 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.2030650441 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.0 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.8 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252630774654 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925511233791 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686133653997 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132763218359 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656257730348 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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