Many people have the viewpoint that regime should bear the duty of conservation of the environment. Besides, some considerate individual suggest that it everyone should take the responsibility of protecting the environment. This essay tends to shed light on both the viewpoints with the help of certain examples.
To commence with, there are many major issue related to environment whose consequences are life threatening such as pollution, population, global warming. These causes damage to plant life and marine life and leads to various diseases like skin cancer, bronchitis. Some individuals are of the thought that it is duty of government to make effective strategies and take necessary actions against environmental issues. The regime can impose stringent rules for people who are not following the guidelines and creating any kind of harm to the environment. For instance- a strict ban on cars should be imposed who have not issued pollution control certificate. Moreover, old vehicles should be replaced after certain time lapse so that they release less pollutants.
Besides, other people are of the view that every person should take the duty of protecting the environment. It is rightly said as if each person contribute towards this phenomenon a remarkable change will be seen and this way we will save planet earth. For instance- If we start using bicycle rather than using motorbikes and cars, this will reduce level of carbondioxide emission in air.
In conclusion, having discussed above two suggestions in detail, I am inclined to believe that undoubtedly government plays a vital role in saving the environmental nevertheless, if every individual contributes it will work wonders.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun pollutants is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...certain time lapse so that they release less pollutants. Besides, other people ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40074906367 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01382488815 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629213483146 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9628342013 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.923076923 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246765617385 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808681530787 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721836435344 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134391148334 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274616347083 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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