Multinational companies or large-scale companies have entered to the local market. The large-scale companies use massive marketing strategies to compete with the local businesses. For their massive marketing strategies, they allocate a huge sum of money. However, due to their heavy marketing strategies, local businesses impact negatively.
when these large-scale companies move to remote areas, the people in the village automatically get attracted to these outlets. The main reason for this is the discounts that they are providing for customers and their advertisements that run on social media and all digital media, these tend to attract more and more people. This cause a heavy impact to local traders such as, customer base will be reduced, as a result the income and the profit of the local businesses will be reduced. The local community will lose employment opportunities as the local businesses struggle to operate. Due to the reduction of employment opportunities, the living standards of people may be declined, and it would result the local economy to be weakened. Market monopoly will be formed. Once a market monopoly is formed, the supplier or the producer can control the price of the product, where this would create many drawbacks to the local community. Due to the large-scale businesses, the money flow will always be out from the economy where it would also create negative impacts to the society.
The main way to overcome these issues is the intervention of the government. The government could provide subsidies and tax relieves to the local businesses. Therefore, the local businesses could invest a considerable amount for marketing and develop their marketing strategies. Other than providing tax reliefs and subsidies to the local businesses, the government could charge a considerable amount of taxes from large scale businesses. This method will indirectly increase the price of the products of large-scale business, then as a result due to high prices customers will left without a choice other than the local product. Therefore, the customers will tend to move to local products. Local business could provide more quality products to customers and priced them at reasonable prices.
To sum up, it is clear that with the intervention of large-scale businesses the local community face a loss, but with proper strategies and with the intervention of the government the local businesses are able to overcome the threat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
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Line 3, column 578, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'leave'
Suggestion: leave
...esult due to high prices customers will left without a choice other than the local p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, may, so, then, therefore, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2069.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3324742268 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94155503791 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.451030927835 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.0 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 12.0 2.52805611222 475% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5850521399 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.45 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.85 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266292020538 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909588414665 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043464779889 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161491539571 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523930645791 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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