Eventually, technology will solve the most important environmental problems the world faces today.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Computers are a grace that can be used towards easing day-to-day activities. Since the world has many problems regarding environmental issues, though some still unsolved, technology can assist in alleviating those dilemmas. Although some argue technological advances will not have a major effect on issues that we face, as they think those will not have been solved, in the future, by utilizing technology, I strongly believe technology will emit all issues, whether they were environmental or not, that the globe is facing, eventually. In this essay, I will explore both perspectives, and I will reveal my appealing to that technology will eradicate all problems as time goes.
Opponents insisting on the fact that we still unsolved have problems even though technological companies are predominant. This has some truth on the service, however, being able to present, as companies, in a large number does not mean to have all issues solved. It needs time since most issues appeared in the last few years. Electronic governments, for instance, did not exist years ago and the aim is to get rid of the paper-based business and save trees. Nevertheless, the demand is tremendously high, therefore they can not keep up with all citizens' requirements at once. This is because of the limited number of people, who are working on meeting these requirements. By the time, this issue will have been solved.
From my viewpoint, I could say that information technology is an astonishing invention, and not a problem will exist in the near future as the technology moving on in the right direction swiftly, however, we, as people, need to be patient. Let's think of China and how they become one of the most sophisticated countries when it comes to climate change control. They are able to solve major and minor issues of daily life in a shorter amount of time compared to others. They have been able to overcome these challenges because human labor is available in China more than any other place on earth. Therefore, their climate change measures, as an innovation, are highly noticeable comparing them to other nations.
Overall, I have discussed both sides of the coin on whether technology will eradicate environmental dilemmas as the time goes and expressed my strong inclination towards that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: LETS_LET[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
...ver, we, as people, need to be patient. Lets think of China and how they become one ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, still, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1921.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10904255319 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87818431327 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561170212766 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4176242415 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169982937136 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0502747575985 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.053809148898 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105397293395 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587317947205 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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