You recently went on a business trip and stayed in a hotel Upon your return home you realized you left some things at the hotel Write a letter to the hotel manager stating The details of your stay The items you left behind What you want the manager to do

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You recently went on a business trip and stayed in a hotel. Upon your return home you realized you left some things at the hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager, stating:
– The details of your stay
– The items you left behind
– What you want the manager to do.

Dear Sir/Madam,
I have stayed in your hotel while I was attending a sales review meeting. I am writing to seek information about things which I have left behind.
During an annual sales review meeting, I rented a room in your hotel from July 5, 2020, to July 7, 2020, as this place was a couple of minutes of walk away from my meeting venue. If I remember correctly, the suite number was 105 that is a part of building C of the hotel.

On 7 July my taxi arrived before the scheduled time. Owing to this, I packed my suitcase in a hurry and forgot my smart wallet as well as hand watch that I had left in one of the drawers besides the master bedroom. If you have already sent the housekeeping staff in that suite, there are chances they have already located my items.

Could you please ask your staff to search for the items or in case you have them already, would you please send them to me via express delivery; since the mini wallet has my official Ids which are crucial in order to travel abroad. I will bear the cost of the delivery just email me the fee receipt, and I will transfer the specified amount.

Please respond at your earliest convenience.

Yours faithfully,
Alex Barns

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44144144144 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30613034239 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635135135135 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.0104347125 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6363636364 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234316109551 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741494462727 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554095892214 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114686224026 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498847960908 0.0580467560999 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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