Many cities are replacing cars with bicycles. What are the reasons for this? Which do you think is better?
As numerous nations around the globe struggle to promote wellbeing, many cities are promoting the use of bicycle instead of cars for the same reason. This shift from four wheelers towards two-wheelers is a noteworthy step as not only it can effectively elevate people’s health but also serves as a great aid in order to protect the environment.
Opting for bicycles in place of cars has health as well as environmental benefits. Firstly, since a rider has to use their physical strength to ride a cycle, they are going to burn calories eventually becoming mentally and physically sound. Japan, for instance, has a long tradition of using bicycles for short distances. Owing to this, finding a morbidly obese person in Japan is extremely difficult. Secondly, cycles do not produce any poisonous gases as cars do, so choosing to ride them would certainly help the worsening of our environment to heal on its own. Denmark, for example, has a better air quality index compared to other nations. This quality comes through the fact that the nation has cycle paths all over the nation and people are encouraged to use them as well. Thus, bicycles can ameliorate our health as well as exacerbating environmental conditions.
Analysing the benefits which cycling can potentially bring, certainly riding bicycles is a superior alternative instead of driving cars. In today’s sedentary lifestyle, most of the people find it hard to stay fit, so if cycling can bring them good health along with pollution-free air to breathe every day, it is judicious to persuade everyone to replace driving with cycling due to its far-reaching effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, as to, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10074626866 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8319568136 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4994468999 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.916666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240335544755 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803321052277 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587013238678 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141698060079 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371255545582 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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