You have bought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems. You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago but the camera has still not been repaired.Write a letter to the company.
In your letter:
-Introduce yourself
-Explain the situation
-Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with regard to my recent purchase which I made on 12th June 2020 from your electronic store.
My name is Ann, a professional photographer and a regular customer of your store. I have been shopping from your store for almost 3 years as it is just a 5-minute drive from my home.
On 12th of June 2020, I bought a Sony 25 Megapixel camera for my next assignment. As I was in a hurry, I did not open it and went straight to my worksite. As soon as I started clicking pictures, I noticed that the zoom function is not functioning as expected. So, I returned the camera, to the customer service department; however, when I spoke to Harry, one of the company’s representatives, I was notified that the gadget has not been repaired yet.
Since this situation is affecting my work, I would like you to intervene in this matter. Could you please coordinate with the technical support team to accelerate the repairing process?
I await your prompt service.
Yours faithfully,
Ann Roberts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77173913043 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9574606885 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646739130435 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4977976036 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8181818182 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7272727273 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192989026194 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061542348367 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543340382536 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838309143743 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496519052711 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.