Nowadays more and more people prefer to wear fashionable clothes. Is this a good or a bad trend?
These days people are increasingly becoming more inclined towards trending outfits in order to look stunning. Even though others might take this trend positively, this essay feels that it a highly negative development as it results in increased thefts as well as health problems.
Firstly, desire to wear the latest dresses provoke retail-thefts indirectly. This is happening because the longing to get appreciated by others overshadows moral values. Usually, trending attire costs a fortune, which would make these dresses out of reach for certain individuals. Even if a person is unable to afford these outfits, they shoplift to obtain them. The surge in the cases of shoplifting from shopping malls and retail stores, for example, is a by-product of this longing. Since the trend is giving rise to criminal activities, it is undoubtedly a bad advancement.
Secondly, fashionable clothes are pushing people toward serious ailments. The reason is simple, most of the fashion houses produce clothing based on slim-fit themes that makes the millennials conscious of their physique. In order to look graceful and attractive, they perform crash-dieting or eat in an unhealthy manner that eventually develops to illnesses such as anorexia and bulimia. In the U.S, for example, 32% of the teenagers have developed eating disorders while trying to achieve a perfect body for the latest fashion and the percentage is growing ceaselessly. Thus, one cannot justify going after fashion is a good choice.
In conclusion, if people start to develop health problems which can be life-threatening or turn into robbers just for a longing to wear the latest attire, in every way, it will bring enormous ramifications in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89959075759 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663003663004 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5138228303 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240024339147 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688062860617 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527238599652 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117872186179 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488964921776 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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