There is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park.
Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• describe the importance of the park
• say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing with regard to your decision of selling City Park to Suzuki builders as it would result in some serious detrimental consequences, I would like to explain the importance of this park.
Firstly, let me introduce myself, I am a resident of Fairview; I work as an environmental scientist in City laboratory. Since my house is nearby City park, I have been visiting this park for almost the time since I moved in.
The Park is crucial to the society members for mainly two reasons. First of all, it provides us with a place to relax and rejuvenate ourselves after coming from a long shift at work. For instance, people do yoga, jogging or running in the morning or in the evening. If this park sold, these would be deprived of this place to do their recreational activities which would have a bad effect on their physical as well as mental health.
In case if the park council is determined to sell this precious park, all the society members will not only protest against this decision but also resort to filing a case in court that, I think, would deteriorate the public image of the council in the long run.
I request you to reconsider your decision because this city has already become a concrete jungle and such green spaces are vital for people’s health.
Yours faithfully,
Alex Barns
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, well, for instance, i think, as well as, first of all, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1108.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75536480687 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59083181856 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62660944206 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0091660302 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.8 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 4.34317383033 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249708644634 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830573128731 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674952860649 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134736699743 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489002571255 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.