here is a public park near where you live. You have heard that the local council wants to sell this park.
Write a letter to a local newspaper. In your letter:
introduce yourself
describe the importance of the park
say what action you will take if the council continues with its plan
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you in a good health. I am writing to express my concern about a James Public Park which is about to be destroy.
To start with, my name is Jonas and I am a resident living in a Gotham society for almost 25 years now.
Though, the park is public, it comes under the private property. It has been considered as a landmark even before I was born. The park is known for open space and wideness. Some people come to rest and enjoy the greenery , while others come to play or practise sport. Furthermore, events like wedding or competitions is arranged sometimes which is rented. On basis of the rented amount, it is maintained. The park is significantly required as there is children hospital nearby. Every civilian holds a special place in a heart.
Therefore, I would like to request you to approach the council about this mishap of selling the park. If the council is still firm on their decision, I will appeal to the high court and the co-operative society to request the same.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thanking you in anticipation.
Yours sincerely,
Jonas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ople come to rest and enjoy the greenery , while others come to play or practise s...
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Line 7, column 444, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are children'?
Suggestion: there are children
.... The park is significantly required as there is children hospital nearby. Every civilian holds a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, so, still, therefore, while, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 947.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68811881188 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60228173389 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638613861386 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4396290412 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.1875 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.625 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269080720648 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731935354185 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708320619552 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124261814403 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668540220536 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.03 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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