Dear sir/ madam
I am writing this letter to you express my dissatisfaction regarding new camera which I bought in your renowned shopping complex. I explain the condition, actually, camera was purchased last Sunday, after checking all the instruction i took it with me at my home , Next day, I used to click picture in the morning but flash went out of order make it worse more is that the scratch on mirror as a result, picture quality was go down.
After facing these problems, I went to complex and return to the same representative and it would exchange with new ones and these problems can be solved in order to complete the commitment of warranty and it will take a week. completing seven days I revisited and representative it will take more time due to technical issue.
Next week, education tour would be held where the data collect through the picture which is compulsory for final assignment that's why it need early as soon as possible. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
xyz.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir/ madam I am writing this letter to you express ...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...day, after checking all the instruction i took it with me at my home , Next day, ...
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Line 3, column 263, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...instruction i took it with me at my home , Next day, I used to click picture in th...
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Line 3, column 330, Rule ID: OUT_OF_PLACE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'out-of-order'?
Suggestion: out-of-order
...k picture in the morning but flash went out of order make it worse more is that the scratch ...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h on mirror as a result, picture quality was go down. After facing these probl...
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Line 3, column 426, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'gone'.
Suggestion: gone
...irror as a result, picture quality was go down. After facing these problems, I...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Completing
...nt of warranty and it will take a week. completing seven days I revisited and representati...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...hich is compulsory for final assignment thats why it need early as soon as possible. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, look, regarding, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76271186441 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69962965099 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694915254237 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.6489319159 44.8134815571 209% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.428571429 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 16.8248392259 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 4.34317383033 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192428048889 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085298619747 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824966924973 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106738567412 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549825874877 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.