Some people say that the Internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems. Which view do you agree with?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
At the turn of the new century, with the development of human’s modern society and galloping rate of science and technology, more and more people tend to refer internet.Some people are of the opinion that by scrolling google provides with lot of valuable information. On the other hand, some might hold the opinion that access to so much information creates problem. I am of the conviction that internet do provide people with a lot of valuable information disregard with its cons. I hold this opinion for two reasons which I will explain in subsequent paragraphs.
First aspect to be considered is what provokes people to surf internet. Now a days, people tend to be more up to date by updating their knowledge, which is the prime need of the time. For instance, a person working as a market analyst need to be updated regarding market perspectives, competitors, new product launch which is possible through internet. If, he fails to do his client may suffer loss and he might loss his customer out of ignorance. So, internet surffing will provide with informative information.
Second subtle point is that internet connects people with one another from different corners of the world. For instance, we can do business online by selling our products on virtual stores and grab customers attention. Moreover, selling and buying becomes easy and hurrdlesome for general public. No doubt, a clear mind with ability to critically analyse is needed to cash these opportunities because fake information is also available on internet to cheat customers.
Lastly, Internet surffing can help students to get along with their assignments and projects. They can write their thesis by taking help of online forums, books, research papers which are not available in physical forms in their school or college libraries. Care and caution is taken while using the information available on internet.
In the nutshell, as each coin has two sides, information available on internet can distract people and create problems. But, the basic understanding and critical mind is equally important that differs from person to person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, lastly, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, while, for instance, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22448979592 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80149897402 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583090379009 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2545014851 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5555555556 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0555555556 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364990160424 0.236089414692 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11402083611 0.076458572812 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105539812899 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185610649972 0.150856017488 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120508737166 0.0645574589148 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.