An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at the
airport, but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time.
Write to your friend. In your letter
Explain the situation
Offer to make alternate arrangements
Dear Selin,
How're you doing, my friend? We haven't met since my last trip to Baghdad about three years ago. Therefore, I feel so excited to spend time with you like the good old days. I'm writing to express my deep apology for not being on time when you arrive.
Firstly, despite the fact that I've informed my boss that I'll need the day off, he's called me about an urgent meeting that should be held in the morning, and will long for 2 hours. In addition to that, I accidentally broke my car left mirror. Although I've planned to clear my schedule on your arrival day, I still need to fix the mirror, otherwise, I'll be charged for a fine. Finally, I don't want you to be worried because I tend to arrive at the front gate as soon as possible. If you don't mind waiting for an extra hour, I would be grateful.
I will look forward to meeting you next Saturday, say hi to your beloved family.
Take care,
Anfal
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-07-03 | Eng. Anfal | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...elin, Howre you doing, my friend? We havent met since my last trip to Baghdad about...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...d time with you like the good old days. Im writing to express my deep apology for ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...rive. Firstly, despite the fact that Ive informed my boss that Ill need the day ...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: he's
...rmed my boss that Ill need the day off, hes called me about an urgent meeting that ...
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Line 5, column 252, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ally broke my car left mirror. Although Ive planned to clear my schedule on your ar...
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Line 5, column 349, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...till need to fix the mirror, otherwise, Ill be charged for a fine. Finally, I dont ...
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Line 5, column 387, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
..., Ill be charged for a fine. Finally, I dont want you to be worried because I tend t...
^^^^
Line 5, column 486, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... front gate as soon as possible. If you dont mind waiting for an extra hour, I would...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, look, so, still, therefore, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 748.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32369942197 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15914330918 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.705202312139 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5437636417 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.0 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218193539108 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763589462133 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567244126317 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155551882764 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261533778902 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.