You would like to rent a car for a holiday write to the car rental agency

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You would like to rent a car for a holiday, write to the car rental agency

Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Anfal Isam, and I am one of your regular customers. I am writing this letter to request a car for rent during my upcoming vacation in Istanbul.

To embark on, I am taking a week off from my work, and this starts on the 1st of July. I will need the vehicle for the next 5 days along with the arrival day. As I am flying to my destination, I want my family to be picked up from the airport.
In addition, I am traveling with my husband and my two children. Therefore, I need to rent an SUV car with comfortable seats and strict measures of safety, for my children are so active.
Finally, I would appreciate it if you send me further information about the fees and the payment methods. For your information, for insurance purposes, I do not have any issues with my credit cards.
I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible, my contact details are attached.
Best regards,
Anfal Isam

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, so, therefore, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35227272727 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57721660994 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647727272727 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.4978458658 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.6363636364 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153307698779 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598086800912 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768854208883 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916767754292 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532820602987 0.0580467560999 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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