You have recently ordered an item through the Internet, but are not happy with the purchase. Write to the company. In your letter:
describe what you purchased,
explain why you are not happy with the purchase,
tell them what you would like them to do about the situation.
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam,
Hope this letter finds you well. I intend to write this letter to register a complaint regarding a recent purchase through your e-commerce website. I have been your regular customer and i did not have any complaints with your products lately. However, I am utterly disappointed with the recent purchase of a juicer blender i bought a week ago. I have purchased it from an annual sale category on your website which has a policy of no return and no exchange.
I am habitual of making a video whenever i open any online purchased product. I did the same with this item. The handle of the juicer was broken when i took it out of the box and it did not seem new at all. It appeared as if any used product was packed and sent to me. Being a frequent buyer i did not expect this from your company as i have been giving detailed reviews about your products as well.
Pertinent to this matter, I have planned to send it back to you along with the video as an evidence. I would like you to process the refund. I expect full amount refund as the product was broken on arrival.
I appreciate your urgent attention to this matter and look forward to a swift response.
Yours Sincerely,
Sam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, Hope this letter finds you well. I inten...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
.... I have been your regular customer and i did not have any complaints with your p...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...the recent purchase of a juicer blender i bought a week ago. I have purchased it ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... am habitual of making a video whenever i open any online purchased product. I di...
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Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...er i open any online purchased product. I did the same with this item. The handle...
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Line 4, column 151, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...he handle of the juicer was broken when i took it out of the box and it did not s...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... and sent to me. Being a frequent buyer i did not expect this from your company a...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...as the product was broken on arrival. I appreciate your urgent attention to thi...
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Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o a swift response. Yours Sincerely, Sam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, regarding, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43243243243 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44688731408 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554054054054 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6005625829 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.6 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272784136467 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090633609066 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676268077184 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151268760876 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101840022719 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.