26. Countries with a long average working time are more economically successful than those countries which do not have a longing working time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary global landscape the amount of work in the corporate culture has significanlty increased. There is a perennial debate that countries with additional working hours tend to develop more as compared to the countries with less working hours. I am in complete agreement with this phenonmenon as this approach is pragmatic, contributing to country's continuous development and pave more space for new inventions.
To begin with, proponents emphasize on the positive perspectives of this approach. Starting with, it provides the ability to produce more qualitative work. Teams get more time to brainstorm the ideas, implement the plan in more focused environment which, subsequently leads to a successful execution. Additionally, more time at work vividly boost productivity, individuals get more time to generate more ideas and schedule their project launches amicably. For instance, China is considered to be a workaholic country, but evidently they are one of the fastest developed countries in the world.
Similarly, more work timings pave the way for an in-depth research and development. such detailed researches contribute to long-lasting inventions. There are many examples where people have invented an innovative product by investing day and night into the project. For example, Apple phones are considered to be the greatest invention but it took a significant amount of time of the developing team to come up with something big like this.
To recapitulate, while working more hours may seem impractical and burdening, it is essential and unavoidable for country's to grow. It not only leads to error less project execution but also country's progress through innovative ideas and productions helping the world to be more technologically advanced.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, similarly, so, while, for example, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56088560886 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1714101516 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619926199262 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6700678695 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.642857143 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301053752888 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102295216026 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636606714608 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180461715719 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477908503368 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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