Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is a famous proverb that change is the only constant; some people believe it by heart and strive for better their whole life. Whereas other prefer to disagree from this phenomenon and stay contented at what they do for the rest of their lives and are reluctant to change. This essay will discuss both perspectives in detail before reaching to a conclusive verdict.
To begin with, it is essential to obtain excellence at what we do and excellence can only be achieved by practicing our experties constantly without bringing any innovation. This mindset works best in many fields of life For example, a worker in the packaging factory has to be skillful and knowledable with the process so that the complete packaging procedure can be executed in time and with quality. It is not required to initiate any change as the procedure is predefined.
On the contrary, the importance of bringing change in anything we do cannot be overlooked. Having the mindset of adapting change compells to explore innovative ideas that resultantly executes the same task in more optimized and efficient way. For instance, a project manager is working on a waterfall project methodology and is lacking behind with timelines. In the same case, if the method is changed from Waterfall to Agile project management, the project will be delivered on time and with quality.
To recapitulate the aforementioned , at one side it is imperative to keep working on the same phenomenon and avoid change but on the other hand it becomes inevitable to bring change to stay competitive and efficient. In my personal opinion, change is the most essential and vital requirement in today's competitive market.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04316546763 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88793708806 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557553956835 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6126920007 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.833333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187625918722 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726158569732 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039539099506 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116319223575 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461674773785 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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