You have recently been invited to talk about your country at the American academy. Write a letter to the administrator and say
– Accept the invitation and suggest possible dates.
– What topics would you like to talk about?
– What will you need for your talk?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my gratitude for inviting me to the annual debate event at the American academy, and it will be an honour for me to represent India in this event.
As the debate event will continue for a week where numerous people are going to talk about their nationalities, I will be able to attend the event on 13 and 14 June 2020 because of my professional commitments.
In terms of my delivery material, I am going to talk about various aspects of Indian economy as well as its rich culture and heritage in order to spread awareness about my country’s achievements in the last few decades.
During my speech, I will need two equipment; firstly, since my speech will be an amalgamation of audio-visual content, an L.C.D display would be a necessity rather than a luxury. In addition to it, I will need a sign language expert with the help of whom, I can cater to people with disabilities as well.
Once again thank you for inviting me to this prestigious event.
Yours faithfully,
Alex Barns
- Differences between countries become less evident each year Nowadays all over the world people share the same fashions advertising brands eating habits and TV channels Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages 89
- Some people believe that modern technology is increasing the gap between rich and poor while others disagree Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
- Some people think job satisfaction is more important than job security But others believe that people cannot always enjoy their jobs and having a permanent job is more important Discuss both view and give your opinion 79
- Some people think that parents should limit the hours their children spend watching TV and playing computer games and encourage them to read books instead Do you agree or disagree 89
- All criminals should have access to education and rehabilitation programs while in prison To what extent do you agree or disagree on this IELTS topic 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: D
...amation of audio-visual content, an L.C.D display would be a necessity rather tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, well, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73076923077 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81683850391 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620879120879 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1549576189 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 76.5299724578 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204793734795 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906617554182 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377453419391 0.0603063233224 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108377246087 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297121746297 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 8.37731958763 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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