The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is argued that the most effective solution to tackle environmental issues is the increase in fuel prices. While I accept that the measure could bring many positive influences in the short-term period, I partly believe that the raise environmental awareness of inhabitants is more important to combat this global problem.
To start with, raising fuel costs such as petrol, oil, and natural gases could help address environmental issues in the world currently. Industrial sectors especially fossil fuel power plants ought to find alternative energy sources inclusive nuclear and renewable to replace. This would lead to fewer greenhouse gases and emissions which are released into the atmosphere as well as to mitigate global warming and pollution. Another reason is that the rise in fuel prices that make commuting costs rise significantly. People who live downtown tend to use public transportations, carpool, or cycle to work instead of driving private cars. Therefore, this could also help reduce the number of exhaust fumes produced in the environment.
On the other hand, rising fuel costs are not the best approach to deal with the global environment. This is because, in recent years, the cost of fuel is enormously rising however the number of personal automobiles still keeps at an alarming rate. Moreover, educating the citizens about the cruciality of protecting the Earth will address and mitigate environmental concerns. When people have full awareness of this, they are willing to take action to save natural environment and other related issues. For instance, individuals will attend environmental protection programs where healthy lifestyles are encouraged and people's connection in the community is heightened.
In conclusion, although the increasing fuel costs could somewhat contribute to environmental conditions, it seems to me that improving people’s environmental protection consciousness is by far the most practical solution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39333333333 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95519128916 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623333333333 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0036628317 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.571428571 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178709871807 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607031444293 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392806042376 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109500089219 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106403006771 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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