These days many people prefer online shopping to conventional shopping. What are the advantages and disadvantages of online shopping?
E-commerce is now being a common trend adapted my modern generations. Overall, it is a important development with certain pros and cons. Despite of the doubt on quality of product and delivery timings, online shopping stores are not only providing greater opportunities to disabled segment of the society to shop from the ease of their homes, but also allowing users to compare prices and qualities before selecting the goods. This essay will highlight certain advantages and the drawbacks of online shopping.
Firstly, online shopping is extremely beneficial for physically challenged persons. As they do not have to travel to the shopping malls for trivial needs of everyday life. Take an example of Stephen Hawking, a renound disabled scientist, used to shop regularly from Amazon. Thus, purchasing goods over the internet would help people, who would otherwise suffer, in easy shopping
Secondly, consumers can compare the goods and services for different companies online. This would either help them in choosing a pocket friendly or superior quality product. E-bay, for instance has introduced user friendly interface for customers to compare goods, which eventually spiked up their sales. Hence, online shoping would favour both the shoppers and the traders.
However, there are certain disadvantages among which one is the doubt over the quality of the product. Some startup companies are usually selling lower quality products contrasting of the pictures they are showing on their e-stores. Another disadvantage is prolonged delivery times. Consequently, if the consumers have to wait alot, it will cause a bad impact on the reputation of company.
In conclusion, even though online shopping is really a blessing for disabled persons and providing vast variety of options to the consumers, there are few drawback of this development, such as the increasing scams and late dispatch and delivery of items.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46644295302 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73791985381 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620805369128 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7963029946 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8125 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3125 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230833066451 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694828938176 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694369795022 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124258004883 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840855254592 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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