TV has been one of the most popular ways to spend spare time for almost half of a century. During this period, this has also been one of the biggest concerns for many parents that children spend too much time watching TV. Even after the internet generation has appeared, it remains the biggest problem for many parents.
The most powerful strength of TV is proximity. To watch TV, all you have to do is push a button on the remote controller sitting on a couch. It is an unconscious action when you feel bored sitting in front of the TV. It can be applied to children when they are in the living room. If they have nothing to do and feel bored, it can be a source to make your children watching TV.
Remove the TV from the living room. It may seem to be an extreme solution to a person who loves TV. However, it is the most effective solution for children. The living room is where a family is gathered and spends a lot of time until they go to bed. Thus, TV in the living room is harmful to children if they always stay around the TV whenever they are in the living room. Instead of the TV, put a bookcase, toys, or a computer in the living room, children will find a way to spend their time instead of watching TV.
I am not saying that eliminate the TV from children ever in their life. Do not let children stay around the TV for a long time. It will significantly drop down the time that children watch TV.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22058823529 5.12529762239 82% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24879821807 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481617647059 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 340.2 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1612863714 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.5294117647 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.17647058824 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267870155402 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994404636341 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694984911118 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174298444716 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293365187328 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.0946893788 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.9 12.4159519038 56% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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