A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
explain how to apply for the job
Dear Mini,
I hope you are doing good. I have received your letter two days back and I am glad to know that you are searching for a job in India.
I have a friend in Here Solutions Pvt. Ltd., who told me about a vacancy for Back-end Developer in his company. The requirement for this position is a Bachelor's degree in Computer Science and the ability to develop APIs in different technologies. The tasks expected from the employee include API development, Front-end to API Integration, and Database Management.
Since you are equipped with all the required technologies and also, you have already completed a certification in Oracle DBMS, I am sure this job would be suitable for you.
If you are interested in applying, go to the company's official website and submit your application form online. Or else, you can send your application along with the photocopy of the required documents by post to the company address. I have attached all the information regarding the job application with this letter.
I wish you all the luck and hope to see you soon.
Best Regards,
Jaskaran
- it is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while others believe that life is better in countryside Discuss both sides and give your opinion 84
- Some people say that young people are much more influenced by their friends than their teachers or friends Do you agree or disagree 78
- Some companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform 44
- You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable Write a letter to the company that sold you the item In the letter give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them 56
- A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him her Write a letter to this friend In your letter tell your frien 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...u are searching for a job in India. I have a friend in Here Solutions Pvt. Lt...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91935483871 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85025856192 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.514604828 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.25 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.408431159414 0.216113520407 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131706694309 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095461734641 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229741401972 0.12726935374 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874505274749 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.