A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
Explain how to apply for the job
Dear Mark,
Hope you are doing great.Glad to know that you are doing really good in your current company as a management consultant.Your diploma course in a management field will be an added advantage. You mentioned that you need a help to change the job and move to India for the better prospect. I made an enquiry about few local companies here. They want a person with experience in the same field.
The job involves your thorough professional experience as a consultant to train the college students as well as junior staff. Need to check their daily activity and preparation of progress report.It will also include discussion about overall work,improvement,progress related to project and its completion within specific time.
I have known you as a best student during our college days and a thorough professional. so you will definitely do justice to this role.To apply for this job,you have to visit their website and fill the required information. Then if you are shortlisted,they will call you directly for an interview.
Hope this will be of much help.
Best wishes,
John Mathew
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mark, Hope you are doing great.Glad to know th...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Glad
Dear Mark, Hope you are doing great.Glad to know that you are doing really good ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Your
...rent company as a management consultant.Your diploma course in a management field wi...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...vity and preparation of progress report.It will also include discussion about over...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , improvement
...so include discussion about overall work,improvement,progress related to project and its com...
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Line 4, column 21, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...in specific time. I have known you as a best student during our college days an...
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Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...llege days and a thorough professional. so you will definitely do justice to this ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...will definitely do justice to this role.To apply for this job,you have to visit th...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , you
...stice to this role.To apply for this job,you have to visit their website and fill th...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...information. Then if you are shortlisted,they will call you directly for an interview...
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Line 4, column 299, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill call you directly for an interview. Hope this will be of much help. Best w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...his will be of much help. Best wishes, John Mathew
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05524861878 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19700991221 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646408839779 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9560699319 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1818181818 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351421613491 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121793214433 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939549533246 0.0603063233224 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190064288813 0.12726935374 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114709620158 0.0580467560999 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.