Application to Bank for Loan approval
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Nakul Mehta,working with a corporate company in the field of designing.I have booked a new flat in Kala Nagar area,which is near to my office.My wife,Nandini is a professor in an engineering college.Half of the amount has already been paid in the form of a cash.Now,to pay remaining money,we have a requirement of some more amount as a loan.
We have applied for an amount of 15,00,000 as a loan in joint.As a part of procedure,we have submitted all our documents that includes our ID's,address proof,income proof,salary slips etc.We met a manager who deals with all this and she explained us everything in detail.Also,the main reason to take a loan from this bank is we can pay an installment most by 10th of every month.This will be really a great relief for us because sometime,my wife's salary gets delayed.
So I ask you to please go through all the documents and let us know if anything is pending.It would be great if you can give approval by this month end.
Hope to receive a response from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Nakul Mehta
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...sponse from you soon. Yours sincerely, Nakul Mehta
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7311827957 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08598403934 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661290322581 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 16.3608247423 226% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.257068331 44.8134815571 391% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 176.0 76.5299724578 230% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 37.2 16.8248392259 221% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 2.54639175258 864% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132744075177 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444500478331 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520812770063 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0558156012961 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525549647346 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 8.37731958763 232% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.38 70.7449484536 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 7.45979381443 221% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 8.62886597938 348% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 8.54432989691 197% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 8.15463917526 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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