You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city.
Write a letter of application to the tourism office. In the letter:
- give your reasons for wanting the job
- explain why you think you can do the job
- describe any relevant experience you have
Could you help me to improve my vocabulary in this letter?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a sophomore at National Economic University. And my major is Hospitality and Tourism Management. I want to apply for this job because I've always found a job that is relevant to my major and also to my career. It will give me a lot of experience.
I've been living here since I was 6 years old. I've discovered all the places in this city, from the most famous sites to the remote mountain villages. I've known a lot about people and culture.
In the past, I have had a chance to guide a group of foreigners. We were riding around the city center by bike and that took us more than 3 hours to get to the last destination. At the end of the tour in the morning, I had some feedback. Fortunately, all of my guests were satisfied.
So, I think I will be a potential candidate when I work with you and your tourism office. I'm looking forward to your letter, thank you so much.
Yours sincerely,
May
Thanks for your help.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... sites to the remote mountain villages. Ive known a lot about people and culture. ...
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... work with you and your tourism office. Im looking forward to your letter, thank y...
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...hank you so much. Yours sincerely, May Thanks for your help.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, may, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31460674157 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58018729827 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662921348315 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7112101335 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.8571428571 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7142857143 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233965146342 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061000530361 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069695398886 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114699501667 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778658162314 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.83 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.