Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter:
• Explain why you have gone to live in the new city
• Describe the place where you are living
• Invite your friend to come and see you
Dear Vanshika,
Hope you're doing well.I'm doing good too.It has been long since we haven't talked with each other.I'm writing to tell you that I have moved to New York recently.
I was working with a multinational company as a project manager.They were completely satisfied with my work.Now,they are thinking to expand their business more.As a part of it,they have opened a branch in a New York.They think that I will be the best person who will be able to take a responsibility.That's y I'm shifted to this place.
I'm assigning an apartment with few local girls here who are extremely kind.This apartment is only a 30 minutes drive from my work.Also,market and grocery stores are nearby.Few traditional restaurants are also close to vicinity.I must admit that I am really fortunate to find this place.
Next week,there will be a Christmas celebration here.I came to know that they celebrate at a large scale.I would like to invite you for the same so that we can spend some quality time together.
I am sure you will come to meet me.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Best Regards,
Nathalie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e to hear from you soon. Best Regards, Nathalie
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8085106383 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98544075409 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707446808511 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.691333521 44.8134815571 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 129.142857143 76.5299724578 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 16.8248392259 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 28.0 2.54639175258 1100% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130073103761 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686872136091 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542294811709 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0809397328234 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511211266854 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 8.37731958763 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.