You have recently gone to live in a new city. Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter:
Explain why you have gone to live in the new city
Describe the place where you are living
Invite your friend to come and see you
Dear Donald,
It is always a pleasure to write to you. You would be glad to hear that I have already moved to Sydney, where I was always intended to live. An exciting news for you that last month I was offered an impressive job from a transnational company which is operated from Sydney.
Considering all the benefits and challenges, I come to the point that it is really a great opportunity for me. The company wanted me to join as early as possible and that is why I had to promptly move to Sydney. For this reason I could not get a chance to tell you about that.
However, despite this short period of time living here, I can tell Sydney is an awesome city to live. Actually we live the area named The Rocks is close to the famous Sydney Harbour Bridge. It is a nice city-living location and close to some of Sydney’s best bars, restaurants and nightlife.
If you are free in this weekend then let us celebrate in our new city. It would be enjoyable moment for us together.
Yours truly,
Matthew
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 142, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'exciting news'.
Suggestion: Exciting news
...y, where I was always intended to live. An exciting news for you that last month I was offered a...
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Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ut that. However, despite this short period of time living here, I can tell Sydney is an aw...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...est bars, restaurants and nightlife. If you are free in this weekend then let u...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, however, if, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45989304813 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52696289636 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641711229947 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3986247861 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.5 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252777601318 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873937261083 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586156720833 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123980537113 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457909418145 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.