Cultures in different countries are more similar today than they used to be.
What are the reasons for this?
Is this a positive or negative development?
Cultural heritage is one of the main factors that define diversity among nations. However, the distinction in the traditions of different countries has diminished from the past few decades. In this essay, the causes and effects of this development will be discussed.
One of the main reasons behind the similarity of cultures in different countries could be the migration of a group of citizens from one country to another. Thus, expanding their culture and traditions to different parts of the world and sometimes encouraging native neighbors to adapt their customs and lifestyle. For instance, Indians relocating to Canada with their heritage have influenced Canadians and some of the Indian festivals are now being celebrated in Canada and other countries. Moreover, some tourists when travel to other countries yearn to harvest information regarding their heritage and sometimes follow them even after returning to their native places and influencing other populations.
Consequently, the impact of this development would be both advantageous and disadvantageous. The main disadvantage would be, the diversity of cultures among different nations is alleviating, hence, tourism is getting effected. Without the contrasting traditions in different places, the redundancy of tourism would prevail eventually impacting the economy of nations. Regardless, harmony among diverse cultures and diminished riots due to cultural differences would proliferate.
To conclude, tourism and migration of people to different countries are the reasons for the similarity between cultures of different nations. Although it would bring peace and harmony in the world, the economies would be negatively impacted due to this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79841897233 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03360649404 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529644268775 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9136358977 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.846153846 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302305468262 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11728436356 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821489433027 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208310386129 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637722030159 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.36 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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