The following appeared in an article written by Dr. Karp, an anthropologist.
"Twenty years ago, Dr. Field, a noted anthropologist, visited the island of Tertia and concluded from his observations that children in Tertia were reared by an entire village rather than by their own biological parents. However, my recent interviews with children living in the group of islands that includes Tertia show that these children spend much more time talking about their biological parents than about other adults in the village. This research of mine proves that Dr. Field's conclusion about Tertian village culture is invalid and thus that the observation-centered approach to studying cultures is invalid as well. The interview-centered method that my team of graduate students is currently using in Tertia will establish a much more accurate understanding of child-rearing traditions there and in other island cultures".
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
In the article written by Dr. Karp, he concluded that the observation-centered approach to studying the Tertian village culture is unacceptable which he proved by introducing another method, the interview-centered approach claiming this gives a much more accurate understanding of their child-rearing traditions. Dr. Karp, an anthropologist has come to this conclusion based on the fact that when Dr. Field, who was also an anthropologist, visited the island of Tertia twenty years ago, concluded from his observation that children in Tertia were reared by an entire village rather than by their own biological parents. Consequently, Dr. Karp's team of graduate students engaged in recent interviews with children living in the group of islands that includes Tertia and the results show that these children talked more about their biological parents than about any other adults in the village. However, before this argument can be properly evaluated, some specific pieces of evidences must be collected and analyzed.
First of all, in other to determine whether the children in Tertia were reared by the entire village or their own biological parents we have to evaluate the method or approach used to garner the information. While it may be possible that twenty years ago, the observation-centered approach of knowing if the children in Tertia were reared by an entire village instead of their own parents can be valid. In the case of Dr. Karp, his interview-method of knowing about the Tertia's culture is recent. A number of things could have evolved between twenty years ago and now. It may be possible that the entire village rear the children then, while in recent times the biological parents of these children begin to take up the responsibilities of rearing their own children. So, that could be the case of the children now talking more about their biological parents than about other adults in the village.
Secondly, it is important to determine whether twenty years ago, it was a law in the island of Tertia for the children to be reared by the entire village instead of their biological parents. Dr. Karp just assumed that just by only interviewing the children he could come to a conclusion that Dr. Field approach was wrong. The other adults could have been interviewed also in other to gather a complete and detailed information of what happened twenty years ago. Perhaps, the other adults could talk more about the previous customs of the Tertia village, peradventure if there was any change in the mode of rearing children twenty years ago from now.
Moreso, Dr. Karp's interview method is truly an efficient way of gathering useful information about the research and in also enhancing the understanding of child-rearing traditions there and in other island cultures but it has to be a survey that will cover specific persons which also includes the biological parents of these children. They should also be able to give more explanation on who rears their children. So, information only from the interview of those children does not hold water.
In conclusion, the arguments as it stands now is considerably flawed due to lack of thorough research done by both parties- Dr. Field and Dr. Karp. If Dr. Karp's team of graduate students can be able to provide the pieces of evidence stated above and perhaps conduct a systematic research study then is it possible to determine who rears the children of Tertia twenty years ago and recently.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 569 350
No. of Characters: 2844 1500
No. of Different Words: 218 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.884 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.998 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.876 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 211 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 152 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 105 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 29.947 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 12.275 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.789 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.379 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.566 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.116 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 28.8173652695 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 85.0 55.5748502994 153% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2897.0 2260.96107784 128% => OK
No of words: 569.0 441.139720559 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0913884007 5.12650576532 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.88402711743 4.56307096286 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91403558216 2.78398813304 105% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 204.123752495 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.402460456942 0.468620217663 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 891.9 705.55239521 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 22.8473053892 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.268179308 57.8364921388 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.473684211 119.503703932 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9473684211 23.324526521 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 5.70786347227 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.67664670659 235% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407941001402 0.218282227539 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142773061415 0.0743258471296 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137587375731 0.0701772020484 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252321237783 0.128457276422 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107094135746 0.0628817314937 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 14.3799401198 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.3550499002 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.197005988 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.32208582834 97% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 98.500998004 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 12.3882235529 161% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.1389221557 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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