It is often believed by many individuals that money can buy everything that is possible in the world. Logically, the statement is undeniable, though in the real time this is not case for people who wanted to live every second of their life. Although, I also believe in the latter factual point.
To embark on, Money plays a pivotal role in every human beings life, whether it is related to buying comfortable infrastructure or daily basic needs, every single person is compelled by its hypnotism. Moreover, the advancement in living lifecycle and modern technologies has also propelled humans to compete for money. To illustrate, Housing, clothing and transportation are necessities of human life, which requires good amount of cash, without these it would be impossible for survive.
On the contrary side, Love and relationships neither can be bought by money. In fact, a poor people can also afford happiness, which is sometimes harder for Rich people. Monetary comforts can only buy short term happiness but won’t stay for long term. Besides, Poor people are more relaxed and happier even with low income, and some rich people leads to a miserable life despite having their bank account packed with electronic money. For an instance, Recent demise of Bollywood actor Sushant Rajput, elucidates that stacked bank accounts cannot overcome the stress or depression in the life. If money could buy pleasure and happiness, rich must be the happiest in the world. Therefore, the truth is brutal.
By way of conclusion, although money plays a chief role in today’s life, the satisfaction of having loved one’s on our side cannot be overruled by money. In my opinion, love and relationships matter more in life which costs no free and stand by us anytime when needed.
- Many people think that important things in life are mostly free or can t be bought Do you agree or disagree with this statement Give your opinion and examples from your own experience 89
- You are organising a trip to the Snowy Mountains in New South Wales for a group of students from Perth in Western Australia Write to the manager of Student Hostel Services In your letter explain when you want to visit the Snowy Mountainshow long you wil 78
- You have just received a credit card statement from your bank The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make Write a letter to the bank manager In the letter Introduce yourself Explain that you did not buy 81
- You have heard that a developer plans to build a shopping center near your home Write a letter to the council How you heard about the plan Explain how you feel about it Ask for more information about it 73
- Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine However at best these methods are ineffective and at worst they may be dangerous To what extent do you agree with this statement 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ted to live every second of their life. Although, I also believe in the latter factual p...
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Line 2, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...ney plays a pivotal role in every human beings life, whether it is related to buying c...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, in fact, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07534246575 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70674497886 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4685392889 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4666666667 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146515994846 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047717931779 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353785400871 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885164641246 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272395519863 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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