Most people do not care enough about environmental issues To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Environment problems have been concerned, but till majority donot pay attention towards these. I,however,completely disagree as this is not true, huge numbers of people are aware about such concerns,and there are few who are uncautious owning to some reasons.

Considering those who are much inclined towards depletion of surronding and preventing it from this situation. Non profit organisations that make efforts at their level to protect environment from it's destruction, for example, these entities have been brought plantation activity in society and promoting it in every section of community. By campaigning, masses are being motivated to perform sufficient practices to save environment. People who are being responsible dweller assist government to clean city, towns as well. At their own level, they collect garbage that is thrown on streets by foolish minds. Consequently, acconting above explanation, presistantly disregard the statement.

Despite above mentioned, orthodox personality who live in past ways of life and carrying out techniques that affect the environment adversly. As instance, they have been using wooden fires for making food which is one of the cause of depleted surrondings. Even, selfishness is another cause for who donot care about circumstances of environment. Considering multinational companies which are not pursuing ways of chemicle's filteration and continously discharging these in air and water. This is because, cost of such methods are high that may hinder their revenues.

Im conclusion, as preception, humongus people help to combat with environment issues, although few are ignoring such phenomena for their personality and sake.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, so, well, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78313253012 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19602521646 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.17837009 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.857142857 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104236231843 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348865102149 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0394919055014 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643357851766 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0155503537377 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.95 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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