You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbor Write a letter to your neighbor In your letter 1 Introduce yourself 2 Describe your plans for the party 3 Invite your neighbor to

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You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbor.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter.
1. Introduce yourself
2. Describe your plans for the party
3. Invite your neighbor to come

Submitted by ehisy on Fri, 07/17/2020 - 20:22

Dear Mr. Tony,
I am Ehigie, the new neighbor who moved in last week Tuesday. I moved into the house with my mum. As this is our first owned apartment, we are planning to hold a small party to celebrate the purchase of the apartment.

The party is going to be held at our backyard which is directly opposite your house, divided by a fence. We are expecting twenty to twenty five people to be attendance. We would be having some musical and pool games which would likely be noisy before we proceed to having dinner.

We are inviting you and your family to join us in celebrating our home which is scheduled to hold between 5pm and 9pm tomorrow. There would be lot to eat and drink and lots of fun games for your children to partake in. I apologize for any inconveniences the noise from the party might cause.

See you around.

Ehigie.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...before we proceed to having dinner. We are inviting you and your family to joi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47741935484 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38704446325 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651612903226 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5015941661 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.4 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2543898289 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870296028483 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501964344804 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156943228568 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640167542155 0.0580467560999 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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