It is better for children to choose jobs that are similar to their parents' jobs than to choose jobs that are very different from their parents' jobs.
The development of varitey of jobs has been increasing for many decads. While some parents believe that thire kids should mimic their jobs chooses, others,of course. disagree with this concept. Personally, I disagree with this idea for deciding my children future carrers for three main reasons.
One of the most important reason is the freedom of decition. When fathers force their youth to do as same as they do, eventually, they will cancel their right of making a choose. This phenomena will end up of psychatric problem to their son's in future. To illustrate, if a mother rise her son to learn and work in her major of specility and do not allow him to do what he's really love as consequence, he either will leave this type of work or develp a problem in decision making skills. As result, he will effect his personalitiy makes him have no opinion toward almost any thing matters.
Another significant cause in regard to this idea is some of parent has low-payment jobs. A low salary work directly effect the qulaitiy of living. So, making their children adapte to this live and force them to not improve their status is unfair. For example, If a father is planing to his son to take offer his position after he retierd and knowing that the salary will be the same, dream live of his son will be disapper. Thus, forcing children to earn low-money will not secure the children lifes.
In addition to the lack of decisions and low-salary the today is the time of innovation.
The old school of working has been chanage dramatically. This modernaization world start to replace the work with high teconology devices.
In conclusion, I believe is better to let youn people make their own chooses. In order to rean the world in more benefacial way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, of course, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1977.66487455 73% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72875816993 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54163712237 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591503267974 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.1393656011 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1578947368 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169410038083 0.236089414692 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0498058725538 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658861606286 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752417495782 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830868963663 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.