Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do agree or disagree with this statement?
Nowadays, Some individuals have too many options available for everything. In my opinion, I agree with the statement, we have lot of selections to choice them. I will discuss the views in following passage.
First of all, In the education society we have many choices for language level study. For instance, In the India, there are lot of options are available for students like a Gujarat board are teaching in Gujarati, Maharashtra board are teaching in Marathi, central board are teaching in English etc. Second one, in the eating food, there are lot of variety food to eat and enjoying them such as a Indian-food, Italian-food, Mexican-food etc.Third one, In the Departmental store, There are many kind of variety of any thing, for example, Dish-wash bar in many types of company, in there very types of soap are their. While today there are hundreds of restaurants with in the same city but in their restaurants have only on the one single menu.
Moreover, In the zoo, many animals and wild animals are in different variety to see in their, For instance, In USA Zoo, they have many different type of Tigers are different colors and natures. In addition, Gold, silver and diamonds jwellery are many types of different variety in some of them are very expensive.There are many different forms are available such as notebooks, cars, wrist watches, pens so on. Individuals have many choices of destinations to enjoying holidays like California, Newzealand, Singapore. From the above illustrations, it is certainly clear, that recently we have too many choices.
In conclusion, I believe that we have a max of choices in today's world, and I am certainly sure that the availability of options will keep on increasing in near future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...y food to eat and enjoying them such as a Indian-food, Italian-food, Mexican-food...
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Line 3, column 441, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Third
...an-food, Italian-food, Mexican-food etc.Third one, In the Departmental store, There a...
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Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
...e, In the Departmental store, There are many kind of variety of any thing, for example, ...
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Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
... the Departmental store, There are many kind of variety of any thing, for example, ...
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Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'anything'?
Suggestion: anything
...tore, There are many kind of variety of any thing, for example, Dish-wash bar in many ty...
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Line 3, column 536, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd of variety of any thing, for example, Dish-wash bar in many types of company, ...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ir, For instance, In USA Zoo, they have many different type of Tigers are different colors and...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...iety in some of them are very expensive.There are many different forms are available ...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...me of them are very expensive.There are many different forms are available such as notebooks, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, third, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86928048669 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.4281759174 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.833333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1666666667 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240542692004 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108278669677 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816752606626 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171969134745 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814163901678 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.