some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.
to what extent do agree or disagree with this statement?
nowaday, some people claim that they have too many choice. this is an issue which is more and more popular in most of countries in the world. personally, i totally agree with this statement and this essay is my opinion.
Recently, for the development of economy, a series of companies, stores, etc are born more and more, which means that at the same time, the products are also mass-produced to serve human needs. For example, back in 50 years ago, Vietnamese just used to ''ba ba'' shirts weared simpletly with black pants and in this moment, they didn't have other choices, but now, specially young people, humain may choose from different bran, colour, quality and style for their own. Futhermore, if market is an unique place having clothes in a long time ago, people in modern society can buy those everywhere and everytime. thus, people recently have as many choices as than last time.
Not just have the choices about material, they can be faced with too many choices from mental. generally, opposite with payment of human's life, they are compulsory work hard and they need to relax after that and for this reason, the accommodation and signseeing is focused on developing and getting more attention from traveller. in addition, people also should choose for their own even having too much those can also make them exhausted.
In conclusion, for this reason i mention above, i think that having too many choices is happening in the social reality and in the future this trend can be more popular.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8488372093 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40712653543 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612403100775 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9885605561 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.727272727 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250348824704 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113836027438 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866593640828 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177567733214 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812745463811 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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