Claim: Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive.
Reason: It is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The statement claims that major cities must receive the financial support they need in order to thrive as it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated. Surely major cities plays a great role in preserving culture and traditions as they are main attraction of many tourists and international students.
Generally most of the tradional festivals are celebrated grandly in cities and people from all over the country comes to attend it. These kind of festivals also attract tourists in those cities. This way the traditions of a country reach to the people of all over the world. Gatherings of so many people of different backgrounds plays an important role in preserving and generating cultural traditions. For the arrangement of these type of festivals, the cities may need financial support from the government.
Moreover, most of the well-known educational institutes and corporate companies are located in cities. Many international students comes for education in major cities. Some of them start working after finishing their studies. They get used to the local cultures and exchange their views with others. Without the help of government financial support, the cities may not be able to maintain it's high ranked companies and educational institutes.
Even though the cities play major roles in preserving cultural traditions, the rural areas also have some unique cultural traditions. In some countries, there are traditions that can only be found in rural areas. Day by day, those traditions are fading away. In order to preserve these tradions financial support is needed in rural areas too.
Every nation has their unique cultural traditions. If they are not taken care of ,there is a possobility they might fade away.The government must ensure any kind of support that is needed to keep their own unique cultural traditions alive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 138, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a nation' or simply 'nations'?
Suggestion: a nation; nations
...hrive as it is primarily in cities that a nations cultural traditions are preserved and g...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'These kinds'?
Suggestion: This kind; These kinds
...ll over the country comes to attend it. These kind of festivals also attract tourists in t...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...e located in cities. Many international students comes for education in major cities. So...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'come'.
Suggestion: come
... in cities. Many international students comes for education in major cities. Some of ...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nge their views with others. Without the help of government financial support, th...
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Line 9, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...raditions. If they are not taken care of ,there is a possobility they might fade a...
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Line 9, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...e is a possobility they might fade away.The government must ensure any kind of supp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, well, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 301.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32225913621 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76806197262 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518272425249 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.453749026 60.3974514979 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.72222222222 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414711155351 0.243740707755 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12054280163 0.0831039109588 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138680959069 0.0758088955206 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24192119101 0.150359130593 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142499541194 0.0667264976115 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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