Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problem.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In our contemporary word, many people have tended to live in another country due to numerous reasons, even-though they can not speak the country’s official language. It is believed that mentioned issue have posed various unpleasant result for immigrant. I personally agree with the view that speaking based on country’s tongue is the prior need for living in foreign country. In this essay I will put forth some reasons for supporting my idea before arriving at conclusion.
Language is the basic need and crucial implement for communicating among human. When People have lived in another country which it has different language, they will confront many problems in meeting their even smallest needs. For instance, for renting house, buying food, finding job and companionship with other natives. Despite a person has high education degrees even in prestigious university, if he or she could not speak in destination’s tongue, the person would not find qualified job. Az a result these problems are caused by being unfamiliar with language.
Another reason for supporting my position is about culture. Immigrating to other countries not only have always cultural problems, but also lake of knowledge about language of country can easily intensify it. For living in new country, learning culture, traditions and deeds are been possible by communicating with people or via press. Hardly, can people get accustomed to perceiving other culture without understanding their language. Therefore, this issue is referring to necessity of Language.
In sum up, with considering above argument, learning tongue of each
Country is fundamental need. Having enough effort for being profession in language can improve the quality of life dramatically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47407407407 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88846150685 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3963570019 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215943254989 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700954915998 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538967000293 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114917811477 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485592290912 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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