The idea of going overseas for university study is an exiting prospect for many people. But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better to stay home because of the difficulties student inevitably encounters living and studying in different culture.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Studying in another country is believed to will confront students with various difficulties in terms of studying and struggling with alien culture. I definitely disagree with mentioned view due to compelling reasons which will be elaborated. In this essay I am going to put forth some reasons to support my idea before arriving at conclusion.
Az many People have noticed, there are numerous merits which are brought by studying in overseas’s universities for students, destination and port countries. First and foremost human’s instinct can get accustomed to various culture, religious and notions especially in young human who many features have not still stabilized in their mind and behavior. When these persons enter in new and sometimes rigorous circumstances they will learn much effective experiences to tackling problems such as soleness or financial dilemma. Moreover, not only have studying in prestigious universities with best tutors had worthwhile experience for person, but also living in developed countries is golden opportunity for students to updating with modern life. Therefore, many advantageous can be achieved in this situation.
Secondly, both port and destination countries have been receiving diffrent advantagious via a subject of studying abroad. If students who wanted to return to their home and they have been gaining much precious experiences about living alone in alien country, they would have faced difficult problems and more important one they have remarkable and effective knowledge for improving own countries situation. For instance, some countries have absolutely groundbreaking knowledge in terms of medical science and abroad students can learn and transfer to own country, even though they don’t want live to own country.
In conclusion, with considering above advantageous, studying and living in foreign country is significant issue which is prevalent in our contemporary modern world. This important social phenomenon should be continued among international societies for progression in different fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76721311475 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01827097661 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8078842312 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.307692308 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21774015954 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772547846772 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580883273903 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12706399675 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350452131991 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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