Hi Peter,
I hope this letter will find you well. I often see your beautiful family pictures in social media but I hardly can contact you thanks to hectic modern life. I am writing to regard my interest on boosting up my career to Germany where you have been doing well with your job. Our company will be closed after six months by this time I want to switch myself to a better place for a better life.
As a job seeker I have a very good expertise on my area of work. You know, after completion of my MS in Computing I have been working on my current company as a Software engineer for four years. By this time, I have got some other short courses related to the job from various national and international institutes. I hope you will go through the resume I am enclosing with this letter.
I know Germany is the great place for IT sector. As a software engineer the remuneration must be lucrative. I will be happy to know if you could give me some idea about the career, migration prospects and salary for the position I am seeking for. I look forward to your reply.
Take Care
Sayed
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o a better place for a better life. As a job seeker I have a very good experti...
^^
Line 6, column 50, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rmany is the great place for IT sector. As a software engineer the remuneration mu...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rward to your reply. Take Care Sayed
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33980582524 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38000753283 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616504854369 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0452406882 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7692307692 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196406472648 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634535024773 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419281607264 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128669341412 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266926030363 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...o a better place for a better life. As a job seeker I have a very good experti...
^^
Line 6, column 50, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rmany is the great place for IT sector. As a software engineer the remuneration mu...
^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rward to your reply. Take Care Sayed
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33980582524 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38000753283 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616504854369 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0452406882 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.7692307692 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8461538462 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53846153846 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196406472648 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634535024773 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419281607264 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128669341412 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266926030363 0.0580467560999 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.